Obi wan,luke C-3po and R2-D2 set of to a local area.Obi wan spoted a place that would look good to find a a piolatea and a ship. SO he said "Luke lets try and there and leave the droids here than can't come in and we don't want to cause trouble ".So they went inside leaving the droids outside.Luke sat down and got a drink while obi wan browsed the room.But an wierd creature started to bug Luke and luke said "stop please" but then a man said"he doesn't like you" and then the creature attacked.But then all of a sudden Obi wan cut the creatures arm of with his light saber and said "Thoes two gentelmen over there look like they could take us to our destionation".So they moved along to a table wich a person and a wookie were sitting.The man had brown hait and was tall and skinny and the wookie of course was tall muscular and hairy.They sat down and discussed a price and other stuff and set off towards the ship.But as they were going they were ambushed by Storm Troppers the man (which name was Han Solo ) told them to get in an went after them.But the wookie ( by the name Chewbaka ) said: "ARRRRRRRRRRRRR" and killed some troopers and whent into the ship and took off and they got away safely.They were on there way to the Death Star were the Princess was being held.Mean while on a far away planet there was Galen ( was now given the name Star killer ) and was hunting down jedi. After days of searching the planet he finally found 1 ( name unknown ) and said " My master has sent me to destroy all the jedi and that includes you!! " and he took out his light saber and charged the battle was epic attack after attack followed by force moves and finally, in the end Star killer used the force push shooked his own light saber ( which was not full of lightining ) and struck his foe threw the heat.The battle had ended and to prove to hios master that he had killed this jedi he took his light saber.Mean while on the Death star Obi wan was turning of all the deffensive of the ship so they could escape and Solo,Luke and Chewbaka were of to save the princess.They had found her in a cell and freed her but all of a sudden they heard Storm Trooper were coming and they were trapped..............................to be countinued

Chewie: ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

Chewie: ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

Once Shaak Ti gets more involved ill start posting unless I can post as if im with Ashoka somewhere else.

Luke Chewie and Solo where trapped the out of no where Leia Shouted "GIVE ME THE GUN!!" and plasted a vent open and they all went inside.They were save and got they're way back to the area where the ship was being held and Solo said "That old man better have turnned off the deefensive magnetic shield on this ship" but all f a sudden Luke saw Obi wan in an epic duel with vader.Obi wan did not seem as if he wanted to kill vader it looked as if he just wanted to stall him.Then obi wan saw Luke and widrew his light saber and Vader killed him and Luke screamed 'NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!".But Solo yelled at him and said "We have to go kid" and they got inside the ship and took off.Princess Leia told them how to get to a secret Rebel base.When they finally got there they discused plans on how to destroy the death star and when they found out how they started to prepare.Meanwhile on the death star Star Killer just got back from his 4th quest and brought back the jedi's light saber and said "What is my next task my master" then Vader replied "I want you to hunt down my old apprantice I have heard she is on the planet Kashyek and is being protected and trained by a jedi council member Shaak Ti i won't you to kill them both, now go".So Star Killer went off to Kashyek.Meanwhile not so far away.The rebels were coming to destroy the death star.Vader had send out troops to destroy the ships but not all were destroyed.So vader went to go help.Luke was almost at the main part of the ship were he had to send a missel to destroy it when Vader came he was about to shoot Luke down when out of now where Chewie and Solo came and spun vader out of control and Solo said "YEEEEEEEEEHA thats how we do it "and Chewie said "ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR" and Luke moved on to destroy the death star.Finally Luke shot the missel and blew up the death star.Vader was lucky that he was not on the ship or hew would have been dead and Vader fled.Meanwhile on the rebles secret hide out the rebles celebrated but they knew it was not over.Also on a space ship was star killer getting closer to his target determained to destroy the 2 jedi.................................to be countinued

u have chapter 4 twice in the title

no prob
chewie: arrrrrrrrr

Shaak Ti:I feel a Dark presence.Almost like the day I tried to stop Anakin from going to the chancellors office.I tried to hard to stop him.But I just couldn't, I knew he was turning to the dark side.And when he attempted to kill me at the jedi tower....I tried to protect the younglings, but I was too late....I was... to..late..
(Shaak To started feeling light headed)
Ashoka:Master, I know how you feel.Anakin was my master.But we must stay strong now.Ok.
(Ashoka tried to comfort Shaak Ti)

Shaak Ti:Ok, But the presence I feel.Its strong.Stronger then vaders even.We must prepare quickly for this.
(Shaak Ti started showing Ashoka ways to protect herself during a duel.And saber combat)

Thanks!!!

Ashoka:I'm tired Master Ti.Can't we rest now.
Shaak Ti:Ashoka, we will have time to rest later.But now we must still train.The sith don't rest.So we can't either
Ashoka:I'm tired of you treating me this way.I can handle this myself
(Ashoka turns away and starts walking into the night)
Shaak Ti:I guess we can rest.But only for a few hours.
(Ashoka smiles and heads into a cave to rest.While Shaak Ti goes to meditate.)
Shaak Ti:*To herself* I must not rest.Ive lost all of my padawans to tragic fates.I must not let this one fall.

I can't wait for more of the story so I can post more.

Star killer had finallay arived on Kashyek and Shaak ti sensed it.Shaak ti said to Ashoka"He is near we must prepare" and Ashoka noded.Star killer was hunting the two jedi down killing wookie after wookie while he was searching then suddenly he felt something in the force so he knew he was near.Shaak ti and Ashoka were in a cave on the far side of Kashyek when Shaak ti said quietly "He's hear it is time Ashoka " but they did not rush out of the cave to attack they waited for star killer to attack first and he did.Star killer rushed into the cave with a big bolt of lightning aiming for Ashoka but Shaak ti bloked it with her light saber.Furious Ashoka lunged with her light saber at star killer shaak ti tried to stop her but Ashoka hadno intention in following the plan they had discussed for the last couple of days.the battle was outrangeous Ashoka was attempting to kill as so was Star killer but Shaak ti knew to win this war she had to convince Star killer that vader was no friend.Then out of now where Ashoka lunged at Star killer with all her power but Star killer was to good for her he doged the attack lifted her in the air ,shocked her, and threw his saber threw her heart.Shooked in what had happened Shaak ti had lunged into battle still her goal was not to kill but to convice him that vader was bad.The whole battle between Shaak Ti and Star killer was bloking and talking.Shaak ti was blocking all Star killers attacks and qwas saying "The sith always betray eachother" then satr kiler replied "NO!! i'm to good fo an apprantice to be betrayed " then Shaak Ti said " You still don't get it do you vader won't be the one who will want to kill you it will ne the Sith lord,but he will not do it he will get vader to do it ".Stunned in what he had just heard star killer was frozen in many thoughts rushing threw his head and Shaak ti took this opprotunity to strike but Star kiler hardly doged it with the force.Now more Furius than ever star killer used all his power to destroy Shaak Ti .He was throwing her every, attacking her with lightning strikes then Shaak ti attempted to stab Star killer when he was noked onto the ground but star killer dodged it and Shaak ti's light saber got stuck in the ground.Star killer the shoked her while she was trying to free her light saber thenm he lunged his saber threw her head and returned to his ship.He had done what vader had wanted to do.But thoughts were still going threw his head "would vader betray him now that he has done all he wanted him to do "that was the one question that puzzeled star killer....................to be countinued

both of my characters are dead......