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Star Killer Admin-knight

Posts: 352 Join date: 2008-09-01 Age: 14 Location: Why do u wanna know.............STALKER
 | Subject: Star Wars Fan Fic Tue Sep 02, 2008 9:41 pm | |
| This is a star wars fan fic i'm making.The second post will have the story but the first one will have chracter that poeple on this forum can play as. Galen Marek( secret apprantice ):ME Shaak Ti:Daisyfan Obi One: Darth Vader: The Sith lord: Luke: Princess Laia: Chewie:darkstarfox Han Solo: Bobba Fett: Yoda: Ashoka:daisyfan if i'm forgetting some one please tell me ( they must be from movie 4-6)
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Star Killer Admin-knight

Posts: 352 Join date: 2008-09-01 Age: 14 Location: Why do u wanna know.............STALKER
 | Subject: Part 1 Tue Sep 02, 2008 10:03 pm | |
| Anikan Skywalker has been training an aprrantice for many years now by the name Ashoka.But 1 unfortunate day anakain skywalker turned to the darkside which made his apprantice upset and she did not trust him and attempted to attack.But he was too strong for her.She noticed she could not beat him and fled.Worn from his battle with his old apprantice he found himself face to face with hios master Obi one Kenobi.Obi One was furrious that his apprantice would bettray him and a battle broke out.It was outragious.The battle finally cleared after several hours and in the end Obi one was tiered but anakian was lying on the ground with 1 arm and no legs.Disapointed in what he had done but he knew he had to do it Obi one left Anakain to die.But all of a sudden the Sith lord came to rescue him.He did all he could to put him back to is former state and in the end Anakain was left a robotic arm and 2 robotic egs and a suit that helped him stay alive and from that day Darth Vader was born................to be countinued
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Star Killer Admin-knight

Posts: 352 Join date: 2008-09-01 Age: 14 Location: Why do u wanna know.............STALKER
 | Subject: Re: Star Wars Fan Fic Tue Sep 02, 2008 10:05 pm | |
| | DarkStarFox wrote: | | Theres no Admiral Ackbar |
hes already dead and i'm gonna have to delete the post above because it's in the way |
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DarkStarFox Admin-knight

Posts: 374 Join date: 2008-09-01 Age: 14 Location: Da USA son, word
 | Subject: Re: Star Wars Fan Fic Tue Sep 02, 2008 10:09 pm | |
| dude who would kill admiral ackbar? everyone LOVES him |
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Star Killer Admin-knight

Posts: 352 Join date: 2008-09-01 Age: 14 Location: Why do u wanna know.............STALKER
 | Subject: Re: Star Wars Fan Fic Tue Sep 02, 2008 10:13 pm | |
| | DarkStarFox wrote: | | dude who would kill admiral ackbar? everyone LOVES him |
don't u remember before his actuall battle with obi one he contacted the storm troopers and told him to kill the jedi he was protecting |
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Star Killer Admin-knight

Posts: 352 Join date: 2008-09-01 Age: 14 Location: Why do u wanna know.............STALKER
 | Subject: Re: Star Wars Fan Fic Tue Sep 02, 2008 10:26 pm | |
| chewie is taken by darstarfox |
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Star Killer Admin-knight

Posts: 352 Join date: 2008-09-01 Age: 14 Location: Why do u wanna know.............STALKER
 | Subject: Part 2:Search for an Apprantice Tue Sep 02, 2008 10:47 pm | |
| After Darth Vader was Born another war broke out the Reble Allaince VS the Dark Side.Vader knew if he wanted to win the war he would have to take out all the jedi.He had just captured Princess Leai when the thought of getting an apprantice came to him.He searched far an wide destroying planets and torrturing the princess while he searched.Finally he came by a planet where he senced a great force from it.Before he was going to destroy the planet he visited it and searched until he found the person who he was looking for.Until finally he came across a family called the Mareks.They did not know about the war so they listened to Vader.Confinced what he was saying was true and that there son was very interested the young boy by the name of Galen Marek whent with Vader to be trained the ways of the forece. ..........................to be countinued |
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Star Killer Admin-knight

Posts: 352 Join date: 2008-09-01 Age: 14 Location: Why do u wanna know.............STALKER
 | Subject: Re: Star Wars Fan Fic Tue Sep 02, 2008 10:51 pm | |
| o and when your character is introduced u can talk and speek for him |
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DarkStarFox Admin-knight

Posts: 374 Join date: 2008-09-01 Age: 14 Location: Da USA son, word
 | Subject: Re: Star Wars Fan Fic Tue Sep 02, 2008 11:01 pm | |
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D3vyn-11 Grunt

Posts: 17 Join date: 2008-09-01 Age: 14 Location: CaNaDa
 | Subject: Re: Star Wars Fan Fic Tue Sep 02, 2008 11:17 pm | |
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Star Killer Admin-knight

Posts: 352 Join date: 2008-09-01 Age: 14 Location: Why do u wanna know.............STALKER
 | Subject: Re: Star Wars Fan Fic Wed Sep 03, 2008 8:27 pm | |
| | D3vyn-11 wrote: | | who do you start with |
what do u mean u choose a character and we he/she is introduced u talk for them |
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Star Killer Admin-knight

Posts: 352 Join date: 2008-09-01 Age: 14 Location: Why do u wanna know.............STALKER
 | Subject: Re: Star Wars Fan Fic Wed Sep 03, 2008 8:32 pm | |
| Daisyfan will be shaak ti when he joins |
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Star Killer Admin-knight

Posts: 352 Join date: 2008-09-01 Age: 14 Location: Why do u wanna know.............STALKER
 | Subject: Part 3:Far away Wed Sep 03, 2008 8:43 pm | |
| Galen Marek's training has started.Darth Vader had been teaching him all he know but what he didn't know was that his old apprantice Ashoka was also being trained on a far away planet by none other than Shaak Ti member of the jedi council.She has set of to train Ashoka to protect her and train her just inacase Vader ever came looking for her because he knew he tought her alot of what he knew and she could be a dangerous opponent towards him.But Vader was going to hunt his former apprantice down but he would not do it and he will not do it yet.So when Galen was ready he gave him a task to hunt all the jedi and that what he is starting to do.But on Tatoine there was also some comosion going on Old Ben ( obi wan ) had found Luke Skywalker and is now teaching him the ways of the force and will soon set of to save the princess................to be countinued |
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DarkStarFox Admin-knight

Posts: 374 Join date: 2008-09-01 Age: 14 Location: Da USA son, word
 | Subject: Re: Star Wars Fan Fic Wed Sep 03, 2008 9:50 pm | |
| still good, noticed you changed Shakk ti to ashoka or something |
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Star Killer Admin-knight

Posts: 352 Join date: 2008-09-01 Age: 14 Location: Why do u wanna know.............STALKER
 | Subject: Re: Star Wars Fan Fic Wed Sep 03, 2008 10:02 pm | |
| | DarkStarFox wrote: | | still good, noticed you changed Shakk ti to ashoka or something |
ya messed up the chracter names so i swithched it |
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