Star Wars Fan Fic

This is a star wars fan fic i'm making.The second post will have the story but the first one will have chracter that poeple on this forum can play as.

Galen Marek( secret apprantice ):ME
Shaak Ti:Daisyfan
Obi One:
Darth Vader:
The Sith lord:
Luke:
Princess Laia:
Chewie:darkstarfox
Han Solo:
Bobba Fett:
Yoda:
Ashoka:daisyfan

if i'm forgetting some one please tell me ( they must be from movie 4-6)

Anikan Skywalker has been training an aprrantice for many years now by the name Ashoka.But 1 unfortunate day anakain skywalker turned to the darkside which made his apprantice upset and she did not trust him and attempted to attack.But he was too strong for her.She noticed she could not beat him and fled.Worn from his battle with his old apprantice he found himself face to face with hios master Obi one Kenobi.Obi One was furrious that his apprantice would bettray him and a battle broke out.It was outragious.The battle finally cleared after several hours and in the end Obi one was tiered but anakian was lying on the ground with 1 arm and no legs.Disapointed in what he had done but he knew he had to do it Obi one left Anakain to die.But all of a sudden the Sith lord came to rescue him.He did all he could to put him back to is former state and in the end Anakain was left a robotic arm and 2 robotic egs and a suit that helped him stay alive and from that day Darth Vader was born................to be countinued

DarkStarFox wrote:

Theres no Admiral Ackbar

hes already dead and i'm gonna have to delete the post above because it's in the way

dude who would kill admiral ackbar? everyone LOVES him

DarkStarFox wrote:

dude who would kill admiral ackbar? everyone LOVES him

don't u remember before his actuall battle with obi one he contacted the storm troopers and told him to kill the jedi he was protecting

chewie is taken by darstarfox

After Darth Vader was Born another war broke out the Reble Allaince VS the Dark Side.Vader knew if he wanted to win the war he would have to take out all the jedi.He had just captured Princess Leai when the thought of getting an apprantice came to him.He searched far an wide destroying planets and torrturing the princess while he searched.Finally he came by a planet where he senced a great force from it.Before he was going to destroy the planet he visited it and searched until he found the person who he was looking for.Until finally he came across a family called the Mareks.They did not know about the war so they listened to Vader.Confinced what he was saying was true and that there son was very interested the young boy by the name of Galen Marek whent with Vader to be trained the ways of the forece. ..........................to be countinued

o and when your character is introduced u can talk and speek for him

very good so far

who do you start with

D3vyn-11 wrote:

who do you start with

what do u mean u choose a character and we he/she is introduced u talk for them

Daisyfan will be shaak ti when he joins

Galen Marek's training has started.Darth Vader had been teaching him all he know but what he didn't know was that his old apprantice Ashoka was also being trained on a far away planet by none other than Shaak Ti member of the jedi council.She has set of to train Ashoka to protect her and train her just inacase Vader ever came looking for her because he knew he tought her alot of what he knew and she could be a dangerous opponent towards him.But Vader was going to hunt his former apprantice down but he would not do it and he will not do it yet.So when Galen was ready he gave him a task to hunt all the jedi and that what he is starting to do.But on Tatoine there was also some comosion going on Old Ben ( obi wan ) had found Luke Skywalker and is now teaching him the ways of the force and will soon set of to save the princess................to be countinued

still good, noticed you changed Shakk ti to ashoka or something

DarkStarFox wrote:

still good, noticed you changed Shakk ti to ashoka or something

ya messed up the chracter names so i swithched it

Obi wan,luke C-3po and R2-D2 set of to a local area.Obi wan spoted a place that would look good to find a a piolatea and a ship. SO he said "Luke lets try and there and leave the droids here than can't come in and we don't want to cause trouble ".So they went inside leaving the droids outside.Luke sat down and got a drink while obi wan browsed the room.But an wierd creature started to bug Luke and luke said "stop please" but then a man said"he doesn't like you" and then the creature attacked.But then all of a sudden Obi wan cut the creatures arm of with his light saber and said "Thoes two gentelmen over there look like they could take us to our destionation".So they moved along to a table wich a person and a wookie were sitting.The man had brown hait and was tall and skinny and the wookie of course was tall muscular and hairy.They sat down and discussed a price and other stuff and set off towards the ship.But as they were going they were ambushed by Storm Troppers the man (which name was Han Solo ) told them to get in an went after them.But the wookie ( by the name Chewbaka ) said: "ARRRRRRRRRRRRR" and killed some troopers and whent into the ship and took off and they got away safely.They were on there way to the Death Star were the Princess was being held.Mean while on a far away planet there was Galen ( was now given the name Star killer ) and was hunting down jedi. After days of searching the planet he finally found 1 ( name unknown ) and said " My master has sent me to destroy all the jedi and that includes you!! " and he took out his light saber and charged the battle was epic attack after attack followed by force moves and finally, in the end Star killer used the force push shooked his own light saber ( which was not full of lightining ) and struck his foe threw the heat.The battle had ended and to prove to hios master that he had killed this jedi he took his light saber.Mean while on the Death star Obi wan was turning of all the deffensive of the ship so they could escape and Solo,Luke and Chewbaka were of to save the princess.They had found her in a cell and freed her but all of a sudden they heard Storm Trooper were coming and they were trapped..............................to be countinued

Chewie: ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

DarkStarFox wrote:

Chewie: ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

ya good job thats what you're suppose to do when your introduced

Chewie: ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

DarkStarFox wrote:

Chewie: ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

wait for the next part and u can say more ( i can make that noice in real life ) and should i make the next part today????

Once Shaak Ti gets more involved ill start posting unless I can post as if im with Ashoka somewhere else.

Luke Chewie and Solo where trapped the out of no where Leia Shouted "GIVE ME THE GUN!!" and plasted a vent open and they all went inside.They were save and got they're way back to the area where the ship was being held and Solo said "That old man better have turnned off the deefensive magnetic shield on this ship" but all f a sudden Luke saw Obi wan in an epic duel with vader.Obi wan did not seem as if he wanted to kill vader it looked as if he just wanted to stall him.Then obi wan saw Luke and widrew his light saber and Vader killed him and Luke screamed 'NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!".But Solo yelled at him and said "We have to go kid" and they got inside the ship and took off.Princess Leia told them how to get to a secret Rebel base.When they finally got there they discused plans on how to destroy the death star and when they found out how they started to prepare.Meanwhile on the death star Star Killer just got back from his 4th quest and brought back the jedi's light saber and said "What is my next task my master" then Vader replied "I want you to hunt down my old apprantice I have heard she is on the planet Kashyek and is being protected and trained by a jedi council member Shaak Ti i won't you to kill them both, now go".So Star Killer went off to Kashyek.Meanwhile not so far away.The rebels were coming to destroy the death star.Vader had send out troops to destroy the ships but not all were destroyed.So vader went to go help.Luke was almost at the main part of the ship were he had to send a missel to destroy it when Vader came he was about to shoot Luke down when out of now where Chewie and Solo came and spun vader out of control and Solo said "YEEEEEEEEEHA thats how we do it "and Chewie said "ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR" and Luke moved on to destroy the death star.Finally Luke shot the missel and blew up the death star.Vader was lucky that he was not on the ship or hew would have been dead and Vader fled.Meanwhile on the rebles secret hide out the rebles celebrated but they knew it was not over.Also on a space ship was star killer getting closer to his target determained to destroy the 2 jedi.................................to be countinued

u have chapter 4 twice in the title

DarkStarFox wrote:

u have chapter 4 twice in the title

thanks for pointing that out

no prob
chewie: arrrrrrrrr